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Diving In!

Posted:
Wed Feb 01, 2006 9:40 pm
by Mal
Inspired by Matt (rokkstar) I discovered that my SB600 can be triggered off the camera (I thought it was only the SB800, that’s what you get when you have a look in the links section!! Thanks Leigh)
Anyhow I did a bit of mucking around and ended up with this shot. I was holding the flash unit in my hands and pointing it up my back. C and C more than welcome. (I have a thick skin)
Looking at it now I realise that it is soft around the eyes, bummer.

Posted:
Wed Feb 01, 2006 9:48 pm
by Onyx
Mal, that's half the lighting for the scene you nailed - the rim lighting as can be seen on your visible shoulders' edge.
I'm intriqued that there appears to be catchlights in your eyes - yet you apparently didn't have a front firing flash?!

Posted:
Wed Feb 01, 2006 9:50 pm
by Mal
Onyx wrote:I'm intriqued that there appears to be catchlights in your eyes - yet you apparently didn't have a front firing flash?!
That is the onboard flash.

Posted:
Wed Feb 01, 2006 10:59 pm
by gecko
A creative and powerful image.
Well done. I am still learning with my SB600 - thanks for the inspiration!
Gecko

Posted:
Wed Feb 01, 2006 11:21 pm
by Matt. K
I agree with gecko. It may have been improved if you slightly whitened the whites of the eyes just a tad....but strong image.

Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:21 am
by Alpha_7
Very dramatic and a great opening shot of your off the camera flash experiement, I'm keen to see more. If you can rope someone in to help out, I found it challenging to arrange the flash, compose the shot and pose and trigger the shutter all by myself, if you have an off sider the is a little less to think about.

Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:30 am
by wendellt
i like the pose and backlighting but i think to make this image more impactful you need a second point light on the side to light up your features
study the lighting setup from these photographer at DLM you can learn a lot from just looking at the images:
http://www.dlm.com.au/photographers/photographers.htm

Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:46 am
by the foto fanatic
Interesting pose and strong conceptually, but I think the lighting needs work.


Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:02 am
by leek
I love this shot as it was - a very powerful image.
I did find it a little too dark though and I hope that you don't mind Mal, but I had a little play with it in
PS...
Played a little with the shadows & highlights and
very roughly whitened up the whites of your eyes using the dodge tool... Let me know if you don't like it and I'll remove at once...


Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:15 am
by Alpha_7
I like your changes John (on my laptop Mal's version looked fine) when I got to work it looks a little darker and flater.
I really like the pose and crop as you have to wonder what the rest of his body is doing.. something I think he's on the Rings appartus for Men's Gymnastics..

Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 12:42 pm
by Mal
leek wrote:I love this shot as it was - a very powerful image.
I did find it a little too dark though and I hope that you don't mind Mal, but I had a little play with it in
PS...
Played a little with the shadows & highlights and
very roughly whitened up the whites of your eyes using the dodge tool... Let me know if you don't like it and I'll remove at once...
John thankyou so much for doing this. I like what you have done with the eyes. When I took this last night I was using my laptop but at work today I can really see the difference that you have made to it. THANKS

Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 12:47 pm
by Mal
wendellt wrote:i like the pose and backlighting but i think to make this image more impactful you need a second point light on the side to light up your features
study the lighting setup from these photographer at DLM you can learn a lot from just looking at the images:
http://www.dlm.com.au/photographers/photographers.htm
Thanks for the pointer. Very intersting shots from Nick Leary.
I think to achieve these sort of shots I need to be behind the camera when I take the shot

Rather than pressing the 6 second timer and jumping into the shot


Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 1:20 pm
by leek
Mal wrote:leek wrote:I love this shot as it was - a very powerful image.
I did find it a little too dark though and I hope that you don't mind Mal, but I had a little play with it in
PS...
Played a little with the shadows & highlights and
very roughly whitened up the whites of your eyes using the dodge tool... Let me know if you don't like it and I'll remove at once...
John thankyou so much for doing this. I like what you have done with the eyes. When I took this last night I was using my laptop but at work today I can really see the difference that you have made to it. THANKS
No Probs... Glad you liked it...
You should do it again with the full-res image and you should get a great result... just take more care around the eyes than I did


Posted:
Thu Feb 02, 2006 3:55 pm
by BBJ
Mal, good shot mate and good onya for having ago which is more than i can say for myself, in the creative side of things. I like what john has done and i think this is a very good image, look forward to seeing more of this type of pics from you, and i think our Rockstar has inspired a lot of people here which is good, get the creative juices flowing.
Well done.
Cheers
John
BBJ