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Sometimes things go wrong

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:31 pm

Like in this photo, but then I come back and I like the affect even if it was a nasty accident. ONly light PP here just a little contrast boost, then resize and sharpen.

Please let me know what your thoughts are.

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Postby Mal on Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:33 pm

Craig this is more along the lines of some of Leighs photos.
Not my cup of tea ( at the moment) I'll come back again later and have another look. After a nice couple of Scotch's :)
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Postby Slider on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:08 pm

Craig, honestly I can't say that I am overfussed. The child looks like she's had a big scare :shock:
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:09 pm

Sorry - no 8)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:10 pm

No worries Mal and Mark, I wasn't expecting a very positive reaction!
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:22 pm

Craig

Me no likey either, sorry :(
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:36 pm

No Craig, I'll have to join the chorus :(
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:37 pm

Thanks for the honest response!
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Postby big pix on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:41 pm

is it worth post........
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Postby avkomp on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:48 pm

doesnt work for me either,

If it was going to be a high key shot, I think everything else in the shot should be white also, and even then back the amount of overexposeure back on the child.
the coloured stuff in the photo ruins any effort to make this a stricktly high key shot.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:56 pm

Steve, I've heard this High key term used in a few threads in the last couple of days, for a relative newbie can you explain what you mean exactly by high key ?
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Postby avkomp on Mon Jan 30, 2006 11:07 pm

because I am essentially lazy, I asked google to define high key for me

this is what mr google has to say: High key: A photographic term denoting an image whose average brightness is significantly greater than 50% gray. For example, the proverbial polar bear in a snowstorm, eating an ice cream cone is a well-known example of a high key image.

It doesnt necessarily have to be all white for instance, its just that in this case the images is predominantly white except for the coloured stuff that isnt in keeping with the rest of the image.
even so it seems too over done.

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Postby Sheila Smart on Tue Jan 31, 2006 12:03 pm

Well, I'm going to be different! I think its great and certainly pushes the envelope. Sometimes you have just got to do something different!

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Postby Steffen on Tue Jan 31, 2006 1:50 pm

Sheila Smart wrote:I think its great and certainly pushes the envelope.


Same here, I think you've captured the facial expression well with a minimum amount of detail. The only thing I'd do perhaps is play with different crops to get rid of some of the distracting clutter around the kid (without removing too much context, though).

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Postby Finch on Tue Jan 31, 2006 3:03 pm

Craig,

Not my style of photography but if you are into abstarct/arty type shots, it has some positives. Keep experimenting, mate.

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Postby SteveGriffin on Tue Jan 31, 2006 5:09 pm

It is quite different but with a fairly heavy left and right crop I actually like it
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jan 31, 2006 5:42 pm

SteveGriffin wrote:It is quite different but with a fairly heavy left and right crop I actually like it


Thanks Steve, is this perhaps what you had in mind, or is the crop too tight ?

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Postby radar on Tue Jan 31, 2006 5:44 pm

Hi Craig,

the tight crop works a lot better, but still doesn't do it for me. Great to see you going out of your comfort zone.

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Postby LostDingo on Tue Jan 31, 2006 9:32 pm

Craig................no
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jan 31, 2006 9:33 pm

no... no... no... :wink:
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Postby LostDingo on Tue Jan 31, 2006 9:33 pm

but I am all for exploration and trying something different and I as one really..... really..................need to find...............a new beach at 4:30 a.m. :twisted:
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