A different pelican approach...

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A different pelican approach...

Postby Manta on Sun Jan 08, 2006 1:31 pm

Slightly more traditional pelican shot, seeing my last two pathetic attempts didn't meet with much favour... :)

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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jan 08, 2006 1:35 pm

Nice shot Simon - I never realised that Pelicans have such great colour :roll:
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Postby Manta on Sun Jan 08, 2006 1:40 pm

Thanks Chris. :)

This is courtship colouring - the bill goes deep pink and the other colours are accentuated as well. Pity their breath doesn't improve but I suppose a fish diet will do that to you.. :shock:
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Postby blacknstormy on Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:04 pm

Manta - you really shouldn't be kissing them you know - who knows WHAT you'll catch??????

Seriously though - nice shot. Beautifully sharp and clear with colouration :)

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Postby Manta on Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:16 pm

blacknstormy wrote:Manta - you really shouldn't be kissing them you know - who knows WHAT you'll catch??????


Avian Influenza? I have got a bit of a cold today... :shock:

blacknstormy wrote:Seriously though - nice shot. Beautifully sharp and clear with colouration :)

How did the swim with the dolphins go?????


It was good but, I'll admit, a bit of an anticlimax. Fantastic to be so close to such magnificent creatures but not the 'life-changing' experience others describe it as. Maybe I'm spoilt having spent most of my youth around Moreton Bay with wild ones coming up to us of their own accord but I can't help but be saddened to see these guys in captivity, albeit extremely well managed captivity. One important fact is that the education they provide to future generations about the ocean and it's conservation is invaluable and can't be adequately taught using classrooms and books and, to that end, Seaworld leads the way and should be congratulated for their efforts.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:37 pm

Simon. as a critic of the first round it's encumbent on me to comment isn't it?

This is excellent. It lacks all the problems I had with the first one. It's tack sharp, well composed and the colours are superb.
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Postby LostDingo on Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:39 pm

Nice shot and the color is excellent :!: :D
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Postby Manta on Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:43 pm

stubbsy wrote:Simon. as a critic of the first round it's encumbent on me to comment isn't it?

This is excellent. It lacks all the problems I had with the first one. It's tack sharp, well composed and the colours are superb.


Hehe... I wondered if you'd visit Pete! I took on board all your advice and sifted back through the shots I had. Pleased you think this one is an improvement. :D (Oh...I like it too!)
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Postby Manta on Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:44 pm

LostDingo wrote:Nice shot and the color is excellent :!: :D


Thanks LD - but I had nothing to do with the pelican breeding cycle!
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Postby kinetic on Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:19 pm

Gorgeous colours! and nice and sharp. Bewdiful!
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Postby xerubus on Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:21 pm

now that's much better :D nicely done. the OOF rocks make for a great background.

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Postby Oneputt on Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:40 pm

Very nice Simom :D I too have not noticed that colouration before. Thankyou for pointing it out.
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Postby Manta on Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:49 pm

Thanks all! :D :D
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Postby Slider on Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:14 pm

Very nice Simon. Didn't know about the colours. Learn something new every day. :D
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Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Jan 09, 2006 7:02 am

Well done on the exposure here, Simon. The different colours, including white, stand out well against the pebbles.
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Postby Manta on Mon Jan 09, 2006 9:55 am

Thanks Mark and Trevor.

As you know, shooting RAW makes things easy - I just make sure I don't blow any highlights to start with and the rest can be adjusted later if necessary. I'm pleased to see, though, that I'm making far fewer exposure adjustments in PP than I used to. Must be getting it right in camera more often. :wink:
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