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Postby Slider on Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:16 pm

A couple from Landcruiser Mountain Park from the weekend. Won't bore all the non-4wdrivers with 4x4s at wierd angles :D

Both taken with Nikkor 35-105 Macro

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Postby Zeeke on Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:25 pm

id like to see 4wd's at weird angles..

top pics there tho!

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Postby skippy on Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:25 pm

Hey Mark,
Not keen on the horizontal line through the bottom of the first one, I find it distracting, but really like the second one. Nice pic!
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Postby avkomp on Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:27 pm

was just about to make a comment about the oof stuff across the frame but someone beat me to it.

like the shot other that the oof stuff.

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Postby marcotrov on Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:29 pm

Nice images Mark #2 is the better. I would have moved slightly to the left to avoid the overlap of the 2 seed heads and also probably positioned them in a better compositional format offset so to speak.
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Postby christiand on Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:32 pm

Hi Mark,

I like the photos.
I like how you set the DOF, it really emphasises the object.
I do find some of the "stuff" in the back ground a little bit distracting
and that is something that may not be controlled easily.

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Postby thaddeus on Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:55 pm

These don't do much for me at all. The second one could have been improved by moving a few centimetres to avoid the overlapping background.

Bring on the 4wd pics!
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Postby NJ on Mon Dec 19, 2005 9:00 pm

i too, would also love to see some 4wd pics! you know you wanna! :lol:
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Postby Slider on Mon Dec 19, 2005 10:27 pm

Thanks for the comments and advice folks. :D

There was a bit of a breeze so it was a matter of waiting for the grass to bend and grabbing the shot before it sprung back. I should have spent a bit more time on it in hindsight as there was quite a variety of different types of grasses and it might have made a nice series .
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:52 am

Zeeke wrote:id like to see 4wd's at weird angles..

top pics there tho!

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Ditto, I'm keen for 4WD picks... please post some up!
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Postby Slider on Thu Dec 22, 2005 10:03 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:
Zeeke wrote:id like to see 4wd's at weird angles..

top pics there tho!

Tim


Ditto, I'm keen for 4WD picks... please post some up!


Ok, ok, here you go :D

http://www.dslrusers.net/viewtopic.php?p=150606#150606
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Dec 22, 2005 11:24 pm

Thanks Mark, as I said in the other thread, you 4x4 shots are far superior in my opinion to your grass macros here. That is probably more of a reflection on the subject matter then your technique.
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Postby Slider on Thu Dec 22, 2005 11:30 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Thanks Mark, as I said in the other thread, you 4x4 shots are far superior in my opinion to your grass macros here. That is probably more of a reflection on the subject matter then your technique.
Thanks,
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Happy to oblige :D
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