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Postby ozimax on Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:51 pm

Hello folks, hellooo folks (as Eccles used to say), been away for a week up in Bananabender country sweating profusely in the "beautiful one day, perfect the next" 43 Deg C weather and nowhere near an internet connection.

Did another wedding shoot Sat week back, here are some of the results, at extremely low resolution:


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Postby marcotrov on Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:59 pm

You've done them proud ozimax. I'd be tempted with #5 to select background and throw it out of focus with lens blur feature experiment with amount maybe 40-50 just to see hoe much more prominence it gives to the beautiful bride's portrait. Some wonderful images. :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Dec 19, 2005 1:14 pm

#3 is my favourite of the bunch

I agree with Marco that a blurred background affect would be worth looking into #5

Good work Max!
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Postby Matt. K on Mon Dec 19, 2005 2:04 pm

Nice work ozimax
I guess if I had any advice it would be to watch the broken light...as in image no 1. I avoid that stuff like the plague unless it is fairly low contrast.
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Postby mrbillf on Mon Dec 19, 2005 2:14 pm

Great work ozimax,

I like # 7. However, try it in B&W.

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Postby shutterbug on Mon Dec 19, 2005 3:12 pm

My fav is the last one....maybe try a IR in PS?

ps. the couple looks sooo young?
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Postby ozimax on Mon Dec 19, 2005 5:54 pm

marcotrov wrote:You've done them proud ozimax. I'd be tempted with #5 to select background and throw it out of focus with lens blur feature experiment with amount maybe 40-50 just to see hoe much more prominence it gives to the beautiful bride's portrait. Some wonderful images. :)
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I'll give this a try Marco and see how it goes, Max
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Postby ozimax on Mon Dec 19, 2005 5:55 pm

Matt. K wrote:Nice work ozimax
I guess if I had any advice it would be to watch the broken light...as in image no 1. I avoid that stuff like the plague unless it is fairly low contrast.


Funny thing Matt, this is my favourite one of all of them! Well said tho', the light was broken in the forest and difficult at times, but a great location all the same.
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Postby ozimax on Mon Dec 19, 2005 5:56 pm

shutterbug wrote:My fav is the last one....maybe try a IR in PS?

ps. the couple looks sooo young?


Will consider the IR, both are 22 yo!
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Postby ozimax on Mon Dec 19, 2005 5:57 pm

mrbillf wrote:Great work ozimax,

I like # 7. However, try it in B&W.

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Will try this one too, I like how this one came out, thanks for the comments, Max
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