Rate my monkey (mogo zoo)

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Rate my monkey (mogo zoo)

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:30 pm

Behinds glass using the 70-300G. Lots of practice recently using manual focus is paying off. Auto focus was producing cruddy results. Im very pleased with the first one.

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Postby moggy on Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:49 pm

Great shots but rate the first one the best, a nice sharp pic. Well done. :wink:

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Postby antman on Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:54 pm

I love the composition of the 1st picture.

Unfortunately you've lost a bit of detail with the fur on the top of his/her head. I guess it difficult with all that white and with the sun shining down on top of its head.
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Postby avkomp on Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:59 pm

some nicely exposed stuff here. looks a tiny little bit hot on the forehead though on my notebook. easily fixed though, could clone some hair from nearby.

the dark background sets the monkey off also

rate the monkey... well.......worth spanking thats for sure :shock:
sorry couldnt resist.
but well done

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Postby nito on Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:01 pm

willy wombat, what a cheeky thread title. I was almost too worried to open it! Anyway the shots are great, there are some highlight issues on the top of the monkey's head (as pointed out by antman) but great capture!
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Postby petermmc on Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:54 pm

I like both of the shots especially for the expressions on their faces. What ape erture did you use? (Couldn't resist it)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Nov 28, 2005 11:15 pm

WW! Well done with the manual focus, and sharp results considering the extra glass you were shooting through... One of the girls in my primary school and high school classes used to own and live on the Zoo... did you get a chance to go shopping in Mogo ? Dangerous territory there :)
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Postby Greg B on Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:10 am

I really like the first one in particular, great expression, good sharp photograph, good colour, well done
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Nov 29, 2005 9:54 pm

petermmc wrote:What ape erture did you use? (Couldn't resist it)


Ha :lol:

Ape-erture was F6.3
Speed 1/320s
190mm
CWA metering
Ape-erture priority mode.
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Nov 29, 2005 9:57 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:WW! Well done with the manual focus, and sharp results considering the extra glass you were shooting through... One of the girls in my primary school and high school classes used to own and live on the Zoo... did you get a chance to go shopping in Mogo ? Dangerous territory there :)


Thanks everyone for those nice comments about #1. It is a picture im happy with too.

Alpha - Went shopping with the GF in Mogo at the lolly shop. There must be a big winter storm coming because she sure stocked up... :roll: I got to go to the zoo and she got to go to the candy store. You learn to give and get ehy
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Postby mudder on Thu Dec 01, 2005 1:15 pm

Love the expression and pose in that first shot, pinkies got chopped off so not sure whether I'd be tempted to crop in closer or not... Exposure would have been a nightmare so I think you've done really well, better than I usually do :lol:

Great expression, it always elevates a shot if you have either good eye contact or as in this case, an interesting pose or expression... Terrific background too, good stuff...
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Postby MHD on Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:10 pm

Just goes to show that the 70-300G can produce some results..

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Postby Muzza22au on Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:44 pm

Well done with the manual focus! I still tend to use auto as I dont trust my eyes LOL. But looking at the results you got here I may be tempted to use MF as the AF on the VR is pretty slow!

Love the first one, I dont mind the fact that he is missing some fingers... Definately a keeper...

Keep up the great work!

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Postby Killakoala on Thu Dec 01, 2005 7:47 pm

I love the expression of intent the monkey has. Youve captured it well.
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