Movement Challenge Reject

I used this shot as a placeholder before we flew overseas, and well I personally liked it, but I got the office staff to help vote on what shot I should enter in the comp, trying to get a better idea of the voting public, rather then what appeals to me (though my collegues and you all have very different taste as well).
Anyways, I've decided bravely or stupidly, that I'll shoot something better for my second entry, so I thought I post it here to hear some feedback. With the level of other peoples entries I really need to lift my game, so please feel free to pick this one to pieces if you think is crap.

Anyways, I've decided bravely or stupidly, that I'll shoot something better for my second entry, so I thought I post it here to hear some feedback. With the level of other peoples entries I really need to lift my game, so please feel free to pick this one to pieces if you think is crap.
